Gimme more...

Math, Physics, English, chemistry and literature- they are all subjects I'm learning in(ww. - at) school, but one of them is not related to the others- literature.Why? Because homework in literature are(gr. - is) unnecessary.

In my point of view homework should be given by teachers only if their goal is practicing. If the teacher has taught something in class and she wants the pupils to practice it, she should give homework. But if the teacher wants the pupils to go on with the material, she shouldn't give homework. As a pupil I tell you homework is the worst nightmare of the student. We, the students, prefer the(מיותר) life without homework, life are(gr. - is) easier without any tasks to do.

What do I mean when I am saying(gr. - say) practice? I'll give you some examples. When (the)math teacher teaches new material toward the Bagrut and she want(gr.) us, the pupils, return it(phr. - to go over it) at home and solve more exercises, that's called practice. And when (the) English teacher teaches new material in Grammar and she wants to make sure the student have all understood, she can do it by homework and it's called practice. But when (the) Biology teacher wants the students to summarize about (a) new system in our body, that's not called practicing, and it's(gr. - is) shouldn't be given.

To conclude, I'm calling to the teachers(phr.), Don't give homework if your goal is not practicing. Please think about us before you are giving(gr. - use the present simple) homework and try to understand our situation if we don't do the homework sometimes.

Your essay is good and you do make some good points, but you should work on your conclusion and your opening - they need to be rewritten. (85)
Daphna