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In the last 50 years we are exposed to space exploration, which is being emphasized in the biggest, strongest and the richest countries. People are trying to increase the knowledge of the(מיותר) humanity about the life out of the earth. Many people think it's a necessary issue (in)which we have to invest many of our resources, and many other people think we should stop the(מיותר) space exploration, or at least slow it down.

On the one hand, space exploration is very important. There are some reasons that making(gr.) space exploration to(מיותר) such(an) important issue. One of them is a little bit spooky- ALIENS(phr.). I've met people who can swear they have seen an UFO. Maybe they (are) right? Explore that subject may help us understand if there are some E.T's out there(phr. - "if there are any new life forms"). One more reason for space exploration is(the) wish to know. People have been born with the desire of knowing(phr. - to know more) more. When you have more knowledge you have more power. With knowing what's going on there(phr.) we can defend ourselves from any danger- What kind of danger are you talking about?.

On the other hand, space exploration is (a)waste of time, money, and many more other resources. Why are we exploring space while our planet isn’t perfect and isn’t even close to being perfect. The money that is wasted can be invested in helping poor people who (are)starving. This money can be invested in stopping global warming. This money can be invested in researches of(ww. - to) find the solution of(ww. - for) Cancer or AIDS.

Scientists say our world is going to explode from the sun in 14 million years, say that our world, and I say people are not going to be in 14 million years(phr. - what are saying here?)- wars, epidemics, poverty or global warming is(gr. - are) going to kill the(מיותר) humanity much faster than 14 million years if we won't do(gr.) something. Think about that - How is related to anything you have written in the previous 3 paragraphs.

Your essay, on the whole, is quite confused and messy. You will have to reorganize it and correct your mistakes to make ti clearer. (75)
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