12/5/08
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Dear Dor
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Hi, how are you? I haven't written to you in a long time, because I was abroad for a month. Well, now I'm in the airplane, writing to you this letter. You are not going to believe what happened to me.
As I told you in the previous letter I traveled to France. I was in the Eiffel tower, the Louvre and in the Eurodisney. But the most amazing thing happened to me while I was walking in the street. You know I'm a fan of Johnny Depp, He's a great actor. Well, he lives in France with his wife. As I said, I was walking in the street, and then I saw him. It wasn't such a crowded street so nobody saw him. I said to myself that it was the only opportunity I could ever get, and approached him. I started the conversation. I told him I was very excited to see him, and I like him more than any actor in the world. He was glad to hear that and I took a picture with him. Then he started to talk with me about the situation in Israel. I told him everything I knew. We talked for half an hour.
I have learned a few things from this incident. First, sometimes dreams really come true. Second, stars aren't only in the sky. Third, Johnny Depp is a wonderful person. And finally, always take a camera with you when you are abroad.
That's the story. It was very exciting to see him. Well, now I want you to tell me about your new girlfriend and your new car. lots of news... you can write a newspaper..:)
Goodbye,
Ido.
P.S.Send me the picture we took in the United States.
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Ido,
your letter to Dor is very nice and i enjoyed reading it! Your letter has the proper structure of an informal letter.In additon, I have'nt noticed any grammar or spelling mistakes at all! The letter is clear, understandable and mostly entertaining. I especially liked the paragraph that tells about what you have learned from your trip to France,it was very amusing. To sum up, i'd like to say that i enjoyed every single word from your letter. It was written in an interesting way.
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